The Reaper Virus......mmmm zombies

Started by djrashonal, March 31, 2011, 12:58:43 PM

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djrashonal

So my brother in law and sister are super into zombies, so much so that my brother in law decided to write a quasi real life novella called "The Reaper Virus" It's a pretty decent read, and they come in the form of blog posts and he'll be combining it into a short e-book soon. I figured I'd pass it along for any zombie fans-

http://reapervirus.blogspot.com/
http://www.facebook.com/pages/The-Reaper-Virus/123887701013157

Lemme know what you think so I can pass on any critique to him, or, like it/follow it, and tell him yourself!
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Privateer

I'm only up to day 4, but pretty good.

I don't know if it gets better, but an editor would eliminate some of the distracting typos and homonyms.
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djrashonal

Quote from: Privateer on March 31, 2011, 06:41:04 PM
I'm only up to day 4, but pretty good.

I don't know if it gets better, but an editor would eliminate some of the distracting typos and homonyms.

very true, i was just putting it all in a word document to go through it now. he works overnight shifts when he writes these entries so i excuse a little, but he never goes back to edit. thanks for the feedback!
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VisceralReaction

Holy shit, that gives me the creeps and makes me want to load my tactical shotgun up
and keep it on my lap.
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djrashonal

Quote from: VisceralReaction on April 01, 2011, 11:49:49 AM
Holy shit, that gives me the creeps and makes me want to load my tactical shotgun up
and keep it on my lap.

Shouldnt you do that anyways?
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Well yeah, it's always loaded but not always sitting on my lap.
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