Just scored a commercial, tell me what you think!

[socalsurfer]

Now all I need is your guys help to win this contest. I have to get the most views I can, so if you like the tune with the commercial, send it to your friends and your friend's friends. pls help, this could really help move me along in my career.

[Mother]

visuals are great

music needs more bass

images need to transition to the boom

also

the kid smelling flowers should have been in the remember when portion

it threw me being in the grown up portion




im hypercritical so ignore me as needed

... <dawning realization> ... oh you scored the commercial as in made the sound... not as in scored an 8th

im hypercritical and jaded so ignore me as needed